SCRIPT

EDITING

SCRIPT EDITING

background + experience:

Trained under acclaimed story consultant John Yorke, Phoebe has provided script reading services for festivals and collaborated with production companies such as Hangtime Pictures, where she evaluates and reports on script submissions. She also offers tailored one-on-one script feedback, consulting, and development services, supporting directors and writers at every stage of the creative process with professional insight and guidance.

In addition to her screen work, Phoebe has served as a script consultant and editor for podcast series produced for The Guardian. She has also worked extensively on both the short and feature versions of Celia, collaborating closely with director Illana Barkusky. Phoebe script-edited the completed short film and contributed to successful funding applications for both projects, helping secure more than $100K in financing, including additional grants awarded by the Canada Council for the Arts. Following the award of these development grants, Phoebe has continued to consult on and script-edit the feature, supporting its progression through the development process.

Phoebe recently script-edited three episodes for The Guardian Labs’ science video podcast, featuring Professor Hannah Fry, Dr Emma Dabiri, and Dr Adam Rutherford. Her role was to translate complex scientific concepts into accessible, engaging scripts while weaving in humour and personality to reach a broad audience.

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How could this work?

Over the past two years, I’ve trained extensively in script editing and story consultancy, working both one-on-one with writers and alongside production companies. I offer creative and structural support throughout the entire development process—from first draft to final polish.

PHOEBE’S Approach

Having trained under the renowned John Yorke, I’ve developed a sharp editorial eye and a deep understanding of what makes a story work. Whether it's pacing, structure, character development, dialogue, concept, or world-building, I’m skilled at identifying areas that need refinement and guiding writers toward stronger, more cohesive narratives.

I believe in championing the writer’s voice and craft. My approach is collaborative—through thoughtful questions and honest, constructive feedback, I help writers unlock the full potential of their story. It’s always your story—I’m just here to help make it the best it can be.

I’m also a seasoned script reader and reporter for production companies, offering detailed coverage on shorts, pilots, features, and novels.

Services

  • Script Reading and Reports

  • Script structure for podcasts, TV and social media

  • One-on-one tailored feedback

  • Consultancy through the script writing process for feature films from structure to final draft

  • Story alignment for documentaries


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Client Testimonials

Phoebe’s Role: Script Editing

"I cannot recommend working with Phoebe enough! From start to finish, her thorough and in-depth feedback on tight timelines helped strengthen the story material while guiding me in staying true to my voice. She took the time to understand my goals for the work and was a crucial collaborator - and we were lucky enough to receive public arts funding for development on our first application."

Ilanna Barkusky - Director for Celia Short and Feature


Phoebe’s Role: Script Reader for festival

“Phoebe started reading for Scriptwriters & Co in 2024 and has proved herself an extremely attentive reader with an excellent eye for detail.”

Zanna Cardash - CEO for Scriptwriters and Co.